Write a poem about the universe
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No mistério do sem-fim
equilibra-se um planeta.E, no planeta, um jardim,
e, no jardim, um canteiro;
no canteiro uma violeta,
e, sobre ela, o dia inteiro,entre o planeta e o sem-fim,
a asa de uma borboleta
cecilia meirelesAug 11, 2010 18:14 by sandre -
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Strolling aimlessly
Happily exploring
Nothingness personified
My place in the universeJul 28, 2010 21:34 by zoe -
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Now with illustration and blog entry!
http://kellydna.posterous.com/ode-to-universeJul 28, 2010 21:19 by kellydna-
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awesome!
Jul 28, 2010 21:26 by discomeg2. -
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Not the crashing part. I like the img.
Jul 28, 2010 21:26 by discomeg2. -
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That's awesome!!!
Jul 29, 2010 01:42 by superc0w.
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O, sweet whispers of the Unknown
How you torture man with your unattainable knowledge.
The great vastness we call Universe,
Filled with whispers,
Is as intimidating as it is astonishing.
When it waltzes through the thoughts of passers-by
One becomes overwhelmed, frightened, or drunk with fantasy.
Universe is not to be feared or questioned,
It is to be admired for what it is:
The Unknown.Jul 28, 2010 16:59 by pensandpencilsgalore -
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Cannot comprehend
The vastness of our great world
So I'll take a napJul 28, 2010 16:45 by mandy716 -
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It came from nothing
And then there was a big bang
Now there is something.Jul 28, 2010 16:10 by saxchik -
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Every poem I write has the word sparkling in it. It's inevitable.
Jul 28, 2010 14:38 by discomeg2-
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Where's the exploding sun???
Jul 28, 2010 15:08 by kellydna. -
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A+
Jul 28, 2010 15:08 by a_noob. -
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@kellydna: lol It was too much for me. It reminded me of one of my favorite poems:
If this little world tonight
Suddenly should fall through space
In a hissing, headlong flight,
Shriveling from off its face,
As it falls into the sun,
In an instant every trace
Of the little crawling things-
Ants, philosophers, and lice,
Cattle, cockroaches, and kings,
Beggars, millionaires, and mice,
Men and maggots all as one
As it falls into the sun...
Who can say but at the same
Instant from some planet far
A child may watch us and exclaim:
"See the pretty shooting star!"
Oliver HerfordJul 28, 2010 15:15 by discomeg2.
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The Universe was spawned from a brave cosmic seed
And, ever-expanding, growing, houses Time, Space and deeds
Not all of it is noble, intergalactic or unique
But a lot of it is lovely like hugs and songs and Tweaks.
To ponder it is par, whether philosopher or hack
To marvel is obligatory, as is to sit back
And get transported to apoplectic attack,
When you think: What made the Universe... then what made *that*?Jul 28, 2010 14:05 by kreestar from iphone-
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I like it! Bonus points for working in Tweak Today!
Jul 28, 2010 14:38 by kellydna.
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Infinitely empty
Yet full of everything
Darkest darkness along brightest light
Intelligent life
And mankindFull of miracle
And disaster
But in the end
There is only
One MasterJul 28, 2010 12:07 by chaomancer-
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By the power of Grayskull--well done!
Jul 28, 2010 14:01 by athanie.
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I am just a speck
on an anonymous trek
wading through the dreck.Jul 28, 2010 10:59 by kellydna -
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Jul 28, 2010 10:51 by athanie-
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Is that a burger in your lower orbit, or are you just happy to see me?
Jul 28, 2010 14:02 by thedigitalghost.
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mesmerized enchantment
our unconditional universe
we are not worthy
but some of us awedJul 28, 2010 10:02 by nancymoon13 -
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The universe, wow
sometimes it f***s you over,
sometimes it does not.Jul 28, 2010 09:53 by a_noob-
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Amen!
Jul 28, 2010 12:08 by chaomancer.
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There once was a doctor from Gallifrey
Who traveled the universe and saved the day
He'd smile with glee
And cry "Allons-y!"
Before flying the TARDIS away.Okay so technically it's a poem about Doctor Who, but he travels the universe!
Jul 28, 2010 09:42 by ltperson-
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NICE
Jul 28, 2010 11:30 by discomeg2. -
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NO! Doctor Who.. is terrible
Jul 28, 2010 13:27 by ltfreak. -
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It's amazing, be quiet.
Jul 28, 2010 13:28 by ltperson. -
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@ltfreak you shut your mouth, dr. Who is AWESOME
Jul 28, 2010 16:56 by jenaissance.
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It's vast
It's endless
Its mystery incites our imagination
It's dark it's bright
It's cold and hot, both day and night
It's home
It's strange
Doubt we'll ever breach it's range
It's heaven
It's hell
The truth is out there, so time will tell.Jul 28, 2010 08:19 by stephie-
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So true ... Plus bonus points for the X-Files reference :)
Jul 28, 2010 12:10 by chaomancer. -
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@chaomancer :-D
Jul 28, 2010 12:28 by stephie.
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the universe is
vast and full of jam with grapes
cylons will find youJul 28, 2010 06:19 by rragsbag-
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heh haiku FTW and cylons are crrraazzy :)
Jul 28, 2010 13:54 by superc0w. -
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@superc0w: thanks, my current favorite thing to do now is go back and watch quantum leap episodes and question al's motives.
Jul 28, 2010 14:41 by rragsbag.
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I love the nebulae
I love the Milky Way
I love the stars up high
I love when believers cry [just don't tell my parents]
I love the universe
And all its sights and sounds
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
I love the theories
I love the gravity
I love constellations
I love the speed of light
I love the universe
And all its craziness
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
I love the solar wind
I love expansion
I love super black holes
I love crazy physicists [wow that one is a friggin mouthful]
I love the universe
It's such a brilliant place
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-da
Boom-dee-ah-da, boom-dee-ah-daBah... that kinda sucks but I tried and now it's bed time.
Jul 28, 2010 01:58 by superc0w-
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Jul 28, 2010 02:03 by superc0w. -
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It's charming.
Jul 28, 2010 05:37 by kellydna. -
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@kellydna: hahahaha that's what mothers say about pasta art lol
Jul 28, 2010 12:28 by superc0w. -
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@superc0w: Do you have a melody for it?
Jul 28, 2010 12:41 by kellydna. -
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@kellydna: crunch crunch maybe? :)
Jul 28, 2010 13:26 by superc0w. -
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sparkly
Jul 28, 2010 19:06 by discomeg2.
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Jul 28, 2010 00:58 by thedigitalghost-
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Ooh, nice.
Jul 28, 2010 05:36 by kellydna. -
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@kellydna: Thanks Sistruh.
Jul 28, 2010 10:29 by thedigitalghost. -
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Love this one. Best submission.
Jul 30, 2010 19:50 by mithila. -
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@mithila: Awww shucks. Thanks.
Jul 31, 2010 09:39 by thedigitalghost.
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The universe is dark and bigger than a park, I'd like to leave my mark, wouldn't that be a lark?
Jul 28, 2010 00:27 by jenaissance from iphone
